Don’t appraise my messy mind
or feign to understand my plight
Sympathetic eyes do judge
the pity extinguishes my glow
Lightly be my friend in life
or heavily be my foe.
Don’t whisper my secrets to the breeze
or profess to grasp their worth
Parted lips do injure
the rumors smother my spark
Gently be my shield from the battle
or cowardly slay my heart.
Don’t exploit my faithful commitment
or pretend to want my embrace
Disloyal hands do spoil
the deceit poisons my trust
Passionately be my one true love
or callously pull my plug.
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I’m not a poet, but I thought I would try my hand at it this week for Friday Fictioneers photo prompt. Sharing my poetry makes me feel exposed and a little nervous. I hope you liked it.
Check out some other great works of the Friday Fictioneers literature here.
As an added bonus, below is a short story I wrote for the photo prompt, in case the poem didn’t do it for you. It’s a few words over the 100 word limit.
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Silent Auction
Placed in a haphazard row, some elaborate and exotic, others simple and subdued, they wait for the bidding to start. The auctioneer announces he’s ready to begin. The eager buyers grow quiet.
“First up, we have a stunning beauty in red, ready to light up your life. Opening bid is $1000.”
The battle begins and continues until all the objects are sold. As the buyers leave, they congratulate the auctioneer on another spectacular offering.
“Great show!” the man says with a wink, his prize in tow. “I can’t wait to get mine home.”
The auctioneer replies, “Ah, she’s a beauty, a lovely bedroom decoration. Enjoy your new bride.”
You’re poem was my favorite of the two. I too feel more vulnerable sharing poetry. But there is so much strength in sharing our soft underbellies. Thank you it was complexly beautiful.
Thanks so much for the kind words. Poetry kinda scares me.
I really enjoyed that poem. Fascinating sequence of ideas and very true and genuine thoughts. “Be my light or don’t” – just fabulous, that will be my thought for the day!
Oh, thank you so much! I really appreciate the kind feedback.
You did a fabulous job with the poetry. I like the many references to light. My favorite, “The rumors smother my spark.” Your story was great, too, but I would not pay 1,000 for a lamp! I hope it’s as fulfilling as a bride. Good one!
Thank you so much!
LOVE the poem!
Thank you so much, my friend! 😀
The poem wins my vote.
janet
Thanks, Janet!
Lisa, you had me with your poem! But oh, how I love a bargain, or a bonus… and with this I got both. Wonderful job this week!
Thanks so much! 🙂
I enjoyed both the poem and the story. Different but both well-done.
Thanks so much!
loved both the poem and the story. what a surprising twist that was though i somehow felt where it was going. still, appalling. *shudders* 🙂 well done.
Thank you, K.Z.! 🙂
Enjoyed the poem…….:)
Thanks, Sherry! Glad you liked it. 😀
Loved your poem!
Thanks, Dawn!
Dear Lisa,
For “not a poet” you certainly nailed the verse. Very nice and my favorite of the two. Well done.
shalom,
Rochelle
Thanks so much, Rochelle! I’m glad you liked it!
Of the two I like the poem more. Both tell an interesting and easily understood story. The poem has more emotional punch and is easier for me to relate to because I’ve felt that way in the past. Go ahead and share more poetry! You’re good at it.
Thank you so much!
I liked both but the poem was absolutely wonderful – you ARE a poet. Be proud of it. Thanks for the entertainment this week – a story and a poem!
Very kind of you to say, Nan. Thanks so much!
I enjoyed the poem, but I must say the story was spectacular! Great way to keep me guessing until the end and I had to look at that twice!
Thank you! I’m so glad you like the story. I almost didn’t post it.
Glad you decided to!